Nap Time

Overall great piece, I would like to suggest a few ideas to help you improve on it:

1. Try to have a crisper background and straight edges over them being fuzzy, it keeps it more on model. This may be due to your graphics program, or you're using a brush/eraser with a feathering feature, but try to use a hard edge as the show didn't really invoke blending as much as it did abstract, hard-lined backgrounds.

2. Try to add some shading to the subjects, its not necessarily on model but once you apply shading it really makes a piece pop. I suggest using black shading 15% opacity (it's what I use).

All in all it's a great piece and your technique is visibly improving with each piece you churn out. You're one of the best up-and-coming artists who draw in this style and your work and originality continues to show it.

Keep up the good work!